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Cambridge IELTS 18 Academic Writing Test 1 Task 1 Band 7 Model Answer

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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of urban dwellers in four Asian countries—the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia—between 1970 and 2020, with projections for 2030 and 2040.

Overall, all four countries experienced a steady increase in urbanisation over the five-decade period, and this upward trend is expected to continue into the future. Malaysia consistently had the highest proportion of city dwellers throughout the period, while Indonesia remained the lowest until it overtook Thailand in the later years.

In 1970, Malaysia had the highest urban population at 30%, followed by the Philippines at 28%, Thailand at 13%, and Indonesia at 12%. Over the next 20 years, all countries saw gradual growth, with Malaysia reaching 48% by 1990, while the Philippines and Thailand rose to 49% and 26% respectively. Indonesia, though still the lowest, increased to 28% by 1990.

From 1990 onwards, urbanisation accelerated in most countries. By 2020, Malaysia had climbed to 77%, becoming the most urbanised nation, while the Philippines followed closely at 48%. Indonesia overtook Thailand in 2010, with figures of 32% and 31% respectively, and by 2020, Indonesia had reached 38%, surpassing Thailand's 34%.

Looking ahead, the trend is projected to continue, with all four countries expected to see further increases by 2040. Malaysia is forecast to reach 82%, while the Philippines, Thailand, and Indonesia are predicted to rise to 56%, 50%, and 45% respectively. Despite the growth, Malaysia is expected to maintain its position as the most urbanised nation, while Indonesia will likely remain the least urbanised.

In conclusion, urbanisation has risen significantly across all four countries and is set to continue, with Malaysia leading the trend and Indonesia gradually closing the gap.
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  • Jutt Life 1 week ago

    Band Score 5.5The line chart depicts the waitage of the population in four different Asian countries residing in cities between 1970 and 2020 with prediction for 2030 and 2040.Overall,we have seen malaysian people living in cities and rapidly could increases in the future whereas, we could see the few people of thailand would like to live in cities. The percentage of population of malaysian live in cities steady increase by the time from 1970 to 1990 then we have seen that from 1990 to 2040 the population of malaysia would be more likely to go to cities for residence.There is gradual increases in philippines people forward to cities from 30% to 49% nevertheless after 1990 to 2040 we would be see lower percentage of philippines population live in cities. Furthermore,in case of indonesian resident population were at lower rate about 12% people was interested to live in cities during the period 1970 to 2000 a steady increase we have seen but after 2000 to 2040 we would see a dramatic increase in indonesian people will be more like to live in cities in future.The people of thailand live in cities was gradually increase from 1970 to 1990 about 20% to 30% then we have seen the people's migration rate to cities was stabalized from 1990 to 2010 then they gradualy increase but at very lower rate about rate of 31% to 40% approx.

  • Nguyen Trần 2 weeks ago

    Band Score 6The line graph illustrates the information about the proportion of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from the year 1970 to 2020. Next, this figure will predict for 2030 and 2040. Overall, the population in four countries increased steadily until 2040. The proportion of people in Malaysia hit the highest point. However, the percentage of people living in Philippines had the clearly different. Firstly, the percentage of people living in Malaysia accounted for the highest, people in Indonesia was the second. In 1970, the figure of people in Malaysia take up 30% and then increased slightly to nearly 80% in 2020. The prediction for 2030 and 2040 is approximately 80% to 85%. The proportion of the population living in Indonesia is similarly, which was increased continuously. The rate of this cities was below 20% in 1970 and this figure increased sharply to about 50% in 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040 is nearly 60%. Secondly, the population in Philippines and Thailand had the different than two countries before. The percentage of people in Thailand increased gradually from nearly 20% by 1970 to 30% by 2020. In the future, this city predicts the figure increased rapidly, got to 35% by 2030 and nearly 50% in 2040. However, the Philippines had the irregular fluctuation. In 1970, the rate of people only about more than 30% and then increased quickly to 50% by 1990. However, it declined to 40% by 2010 and remained it until 2020. In the future, the prediction for 2030 and 2040 is approximately 45% to 50%.

  • Vaibhav4951 3 weeks ago

    Band Score 6The line graph depicts the percentage of people who lived in cities from 1970 to 2020, with the expectation for 2030 and 2040 in four Asian countries. Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of people who live in cities in Malaysia followed a steady rise trend, whereas others show a fluctuating trend. In 1970, the percentage of the population living in cities in Malaysia and the Philippines was around 30% , whereas Thailand and Indonesia had almost 18% and 15% respectively. This trend in Malaysia continued to grow till 2020, at around 73%, which was expected to increase to 82% in 2040. However, the percentage of people who live in the Philippines cities experience fluctuated trend till 2010, then it rose steadily to almost half of the population in 2020 and is predicted to reach at 55% in 2040. By 2000, the percentage of population living in cities in Thailand and Malaysia was same, but Thailand will become the second highest in 2040, and Indonesia will become the lowest among four countries

  • Radhikasehgal789 3 weeks ago

    Band Score 6The graph illustrates the proportion of the population living in four different countries, namely the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia, during the period of 1970 to 2020 and expectations for the years 2020 and 2040. Overall, there was a increase in the population of Malaysia and Indonesia over the whole period. While the Philippines and Thailand demonstrated a significant decrease in the middle years, they are predicted to rise over the upcoming years. In the year 1970, Malaysia and the Philippines had similar percentages of population accounted for, about 30%. Moving further, the trend rose significantly in Malaysia and became the highest populated city in 2020 with about 70% of the population and is predicted to follow the constant rising trend at the end of the year 2040 by 80%. However, the Philippines showed a substantial decline in population in 2010 by 40% and is expected to rise in 2040 by 50%. At the beginning of the years, the population of Thailand rose to about 25%, and then it became constant over the years from 1990 to 2020 and increased about 45% in 2040. Whilst, Indonesia was the city that showed a greater rise in population over the whole years and will reach up to 60% of the population in the end of the period.

  • Rully Putri Nirmala Puji 3 weeks ago

    Band Score 5.5The graph shows the percentage of the population living in cities in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020. In general, Every country has moved forwad every year meanwhile there is one of the country named Philippines goes down in 2000. Indonesia becomed the lowest percentage in 1970 than all of the four country. The percentage of population in Indonesia growed up gradually every year and reached about 60% in 2040. Thailand growed very slowly compared with others and reached 45% in 2040. Malaysia in the other hand was the highest percentage of population that reached 80% in 2040. It also growed straighly every year. it growed up straighly in 2000 with 60% population from 45% in 2000.

  • Thinhle29092009 1 month ago

    Band Score 6The graph shows city living going up in the Philippines Malaysia Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 onwards with some future numbers too. Overall, Malaysia has the biggest share most years and that looks set to keep going. Thailand stays lowest for a long time. Indonesia has the biggest jumps especially later on. In 1970 the Philippines was at 32 percent and Malaysia just under that at 30. Thailand and Indonesia started much lower around 18 and 13. By 1990 things had changed with the Philippines reaching almost 50 percent. Malaysia overtook later on. It went from 60 percent in 2000 up to 76 in 2020 and it seems it will get to 83 by 2040. The Philippines fell to 43 then rose a little. Indonesia grew a lot to 53 percent by 2020 and probably 64 later. Thailand was slower reaching 33 then heading to 50.

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